Canon and Canon (Sort of) Verse Feedback

[olliequeen]

Like a scene in particular? Don't agree Oliver would act the way he did at some point? Have an idea for a storyline for the universe? Let me know here. I'm always happy to have feedback of all kinds! :D

Oh, anonymous comments are screened, just to avoid any unnecessary drama.

Comments

[slytherinpunk.livejournal.com]

While I've never had the problem thinking anything was ever out of character when I was reading the other verses, I'm still amazed at how dead-on you are with Oliver's character. Even in Canon you don't miss a beat, and in Canon (sort of) there hasn't been a moment where I've questioned anything, and I'm always looking forward to an update, to see how you percieve the growing attraction between Chloe and Oliver.

Because this is Canon; Canon (sort of), you definitely have the mystery of where this could go. And even if this verse doesn't end up Chlollie... It's still a wonderful experience of emotions and fun entertainment to read =)

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[slytherinpunk.livejournal.com]

Not that I'm not enjoying Twitter verse... I'm just biting my nails with anxiety here.

(not going to lie--Oliver alone with Tess, even after he gave a simple kiss to Chloe has me worried I'm heading for heartbreak... But making me feel all of these emotions while I read?--Extraordinary job.)

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[dl-greenarrow.livejournal.com]

Hee. This place works fine for twitter verse. ;)

It's no secret that twitter verse Ollie is pretty conflicted when it comes to Tess, but don't worry. ;) I'm glad you liked it even if it made you nervous! *hugs*

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[slytherinpunk.livejournal.com]

*hugs* Anything you or chloeas write is hard not to enjoy. And I love angst as much as the next person--I imagine after the short time Chloe and Oliver have spent together, this seperation won't be easy for either of them. And I'm looking forward to seeing how they both deal with that.

Really interested to see where you take this verse. =)

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[dl-greenarrow.livejournal.com]

You have no idea how much we appreciate the feedback, seriously. <3 We have a great deal of fun with this whole RP thing, and no, I'm pretty sure the separation--brief as it is--won't have been easy on them. I'm looking forward to writing that with chloeas as well. :D Obviously by bringing back Lex into the fold, this is no longer canon with SV, so that's why it's only being labeled as twitter. I'm trying to figure out how to label and tag and organize things so they'll be least confusing for everyone (myself included, haha).

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[slytherinpunk.livejournal.com]

You deserve it--I honestly have never been into roleplaying before, I've been heavily into fanbases, Harry Potter, Anime, etc, and been asked to role-play, but never wanted to, or been interested in enough to read any.

I literally, check your and chloeas's journals everyday.

I like that you're not waiting for SV to hint at Lex--in order to start this verse. Very eager to see what you have in-store for Chloe & Oliver.

And to be honest, your journal is very clean and organized. Half the reason I organized mine was because after having a reading marathon of all your verses, I looked at my journal and felt so disorganized; I went through and cleared it out and added more tags and, well, it's much easier now XD

Anyways, thanks again for everything. And I can't wait for your next update (especially for Lost! or Quiver).